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I'm in the drive through window...
Car after car is coming through and the constant beeping in my ear tells me there is no end to the people.


All these people wanting things.

I go as fast as I can, which causes me to drop this man's change..."That's your tip..." he says, and drives off.

"Thanks douche." I mutter.


"Tobe, start hopping!!!" One of my managers yells. I grab an order and take it out to a car down the line in drive through.

When I get back I see that all the orders have been clocked off, and my scancard is sitting on the receipt machine...

That means somebody told the computer I have collected money I didn't, and I will be responsible for it.


I ask around at the end of my shift, but nobody claims to have done it. I have to make it up out of my paycheck.



The next day is just like this.

Every day, all these people want...
Every day I give.


We never speak, except to do the transaction.

The drive-through dance.

But she is quite possibly the most beautiful thing ever.

I like to think of all her smiles as flirting, that she is playing hard to get.


Of course, this is just ridiculous contemplation to cure the boredom.


When the chaos dies down I am told to go outside and do the windows.

I get to the drive through one and I find a sticky note on the sill, right where I can't see it from inside...

I look around for the culprit, and when I see that drive, and all the stalls on this side, are dead, I pick up the note.


It's folded in half, and on the outside it says in tiny but elongated letters, "Tobe.
"
It is definitely for me.


On the inside all I see is a number.

And another name.

"Acelynn.
"

As soon as I get home I ask my best friend Marquis what he thinks...
:iconchananamuffin:

Author's Comments

New character time!!!

A different set of people, but they will intertwine with the people in "Adair."

More info on the down low if you note me
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:iconbahama-dreams:
Very cool, now this sounds like an intro story to me.

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:iconnkishimoto:
Thats awesome. *thumbs up*

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:iconchananamuffin:
Oh you!

It was really cool actually getting to meet you.
You're a sweet kid, and I like that you and Kristen go so well together.

And thanks...any specific crit or opinions you have on it?

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:iconchananamuffin:
I am interested in what you have to say.

It was kind of spontaneous, but then you know I will find any ridiculous reason to insult myself.

So please, GO! Go hard, and go honest on me.

<3

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:iconbahama-dreams:
I will....promise

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:iconchananamuffin:
Good.

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:iconnkishimoto:
First off thanks. It was fun to finaly meet you guys...YOU GUYS ARE CRAAAAAAAAZY! xD
But I'm not much of an author...I did like the (whats the word?) Imagry?
It reminds me of [link] Funny eh?
It seemed so real to me. It could easily be somones life, the way you described it.

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:iconsparkrocker:
Your writing has a very dreamy quality. Sometimes that makes it a little difficult to follow, but it also makes it very intriguing.

I really do hope to see more.

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:iconchananamuffin:
OH...

There IS more...

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there's a mindless self indulgence lyric for any occasion...

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